80% of your offer copy should be focused on the transformational benefit.
You’ve got to take them into the future and show them what their life could be like a few short days, weeks or months from now…however long it takes to get the transformation that you’re bringing with your product or service.
You’ve got to paint this picture so vividly that they can’t help but relate and see it in their minds. If you’re selling an exercise or weight loss program you’ve got to paint the picture of how it’s going to feel giving away the clothes that don’t fit anymore, pulling on the skinny jeans that haven’t fit in 8 years, feeling sexy, attracting the attention of their partner or potential partner…whatever the transformation is that your ideal client is seeking is what you have to paint so clearly.
You want to show them their new life.
And when they can grab hold of that – when they can SEE it in their mind as if it’s real – they’ll have to buy…and then you will have for yourself not just a product but an irresistible offer!